I read at PINAWOR Saturday morning for the first time in 6 or 8 weeks. It was a new story I wrote trying to use more description than I usually do. A dozen people critiqued me and a few even said they liked it. I have incorporated some of the suggestions into the story and will finish reading it next week.
I believe I will use it as an example in my class and e-publish it.

The playwright said he had to rewrite some because I wouldn't be in the play. He jokingly said he wanted to make me feel guilty, but I don't.

Got a couple of rejections this week.
JH