The editor of the PINAWOR newsletter has given me some very good pointers and says since a 50th anniversary is such a momentous occasion, he will consider printing it in the August edition.

Also, I jumped the gun and submitted it to the local newspaper, after which I saw many possible improvements. I must learn patience if I am to submit my best work anywhere.

Rewrite. Put it aside. Then rewrite again. Do this more than once.

I'm still hanging in on my Glimmer Train story. I should know in a week and a half or so. What if they print it? WOW!
 JH